tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-247308575914822860.post3464097761670860428..comments2024-03-13T19:25:44.542+05:30Comments on लेखनी...: छू लिया आसमान!!डॉ. महफूज़ अली (Dr. Mahfooz Ali)http://www.blogger.com/profile/13152343302016007973noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-247308575914822860.post-46265451504625509222010-01-20T18:17:13.949+05:302010-01-20T18:17:13.949+05:30chhu lia na ? ab batao mujhe kaisa hai? mujhe bhi ...chhu lia na ? ab batao mujhe kaisa hai? mujhe bhi mahsus karna hai...<br /><br />i have no words for this creation .............shikha varshneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07611846269234719146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-247308575914822860.post-25635438125812665402009-07-02T21:50:24.229+05:302009-07-02T21:50:24.229+05:30wowwwwwwwwww
kitna sundar
thoughts hai
to choooooo...wowwwwwwwwww<br />kitna sundar<br />thoughts hai<br />to choooooooo lena<br />aasmaan<br />wowwwwww if I could touch<br />like this<br />lovely poem<br />10+++<br />AnjaliUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16964740438483123260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-247308575914822860.post-19160554561846739072009-06-30T18:34:24.669+05:302009-06-30T18:34:24.669+05:30महफूज़ जी बहुत ही बढ़िया रचना है।
आसमान को छूने क...महफूज़ जी बहुत ही बढ़िया रचना है। <br />आसमान को छूने का अहसास वाकई खूबसूरत है।PREETI BARTHWALhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07147371640692507101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-247308575914822860.post-24092101581130214032009-06-24T00:08:05.243+05:302009-06-24T00:08:05.243+05:30Lovely feelings...as soft as, the skies, that u im...Lovely feelings...as soft as, the skies, that u imagined..! <br />"Aasmaan" ek kalpana matr hee to hai...! Koyi chhoo paya hai? Mehsoos kar paya hai?Aur kahan tak faila hai...naa kisee rushee ko pata na kisee khagol shatrgya ko..!Tabhee to apnee rahasymay goodhtaa liye hue hai...!<br /><br />Kabhi, kabhi lagta hai, ye itnaa khaalee, itnaa door door tak faila hua naa hota to,mere apnon ko mujhse door janeka mauqa nahee milta...! Khair..jaane wale firbhee chalehee jaate..aasmaan me udke na sahee..paanee ke zariye...in parindon ko kaun rok paya hai...<br /><br />Mere blog pebhee gar aap,"moon",yaa" littlegirl","prankster"in shabdon pe click karenge to English section me pohonch jayenge!<br />Ek sansmaran, jo chhoti bachhee kee nigah se likha hai," A ladder to the moon", aapko forward kar doongee..<br /><br />Shayad mera harek blog aapko, yaadonkaa safar karayega..chahe,"paridhaan",ho,"lizzat" ho, "dharohar"ho,"fiber art"ho yaa chindichindi"..."grihsajja" bhee...harek cheez ke saath ek yaad,ek kahanee judee hai...har chhoti- chhoti kapdekee tukdee ek dastan sunayegi!<br /><br />http://aajtakyahantak-thelightbyalonelypath.blogspot.com<br /><br />http://lalitlekh.blogspot.com<br /><br />http://kavitasbyshama.blogspot.com<br /><br />http://fiberart-thelightbyalonelypath.blogspot.com<br /><br />( jo kavita blog "The light..."se juda hai,wo updated nahee hai).<br /><br />Intezaar rahga aap jaise pathak kaa mere har blog pe...kyonki har blog ek sansmaran hai...shayad sahee vivaran kiya aapne..dairy ke pannon kee tarah..<br /><br />Its been too long a comment!<br /><br />Aur "Mehfooz" se gar dua milegee kee to mai zaroor har dukh takleef se mehfooz rahungee, haina?shamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15550777701990954859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-247308575914822860.post-46643700477985268402009-06-23T23:11:07.083+05:302009-06-23T23:11:07.083+05:30ले आना अपने साथ
थोड़ा सा अहसास
और
कराना महसूस
मुझ...ले आना अपने साथ <br />थोड़ा सा अहसास<br />और <br />कराना महसूस<br />मुझे...... <br />और मेरा ...............<br />आसमान.... <br />अब मेरे पास है॥ <br /><br />वाह....! अनोखी रचना ...और वो भी लाजवाब ....!!हरकीरत ' हीर'https://www.blogger.com/profile/09462263786489609976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-247308575914822860.post-47308302903352620782009-06-23T16:15:14.616+05:302009-06-23T16:15:14.616+05:30haan maine bhi choo liya aasmaan ........sundarhaan maine bhi choo liya aasmaan ........sundarओम आर्यhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05608555899968867999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-247308575914822860.post-53354217248413680932009-06-23T06:21:55.383+05:302009-06-23T06:21:55.383+05:30chhune ko aasmaan or bhi hai...khubsurat ahsaasos...chhune ko aasmaan or bhi hai...khubsurat ahsaasose bhari kavita....डिम्पल मल्होत्राhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07224725278715403648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-247308575914822860.post-44017739083065341352009-06-23T02:10:34.049+05:302009-06-23T02:10:34.049+05:30वाह!! क्या कहने!वाह!! क्या कहने!Udan Tashtarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06057252073193171933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-247308575914822860.post-50886656087512872162009-06-23T00:19:02.634+05:302009-06-23T00:19:02.634+05:30और मुझे बताना
कैसा था?
फूल सा नाज़ुक
या
रुई सा नरम?...और मुझे बताना<br />कैसा था?<br />फूल सा नाज़ुक<br />या<br />रुई सा नरम?<br /><br /> Ati Sunder.Asha Joglekarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05351082141819705264noreply@blogger.com